If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby TheTeddyguy » Wed Dec 24, 2014 3:29 pm

Well obviously lol.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Thu Dec 25, 2014 4:52 am

First encounters are always the hardest to write, lol. Did I do good?
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby tyrud » Thu Dec 25, 2014 7:35 pm

You did really well. I especially liked the fact that you made them go back. That's a lot more realistic and saner than having them go deeper into the city.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Sat Dec 27, 2014 4:42 am

TYRUD YOU'RE ONLINE
GIMME OPINIONS ON DAT 3200+ WORD POST
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby tyrud » Sat Dec 27, 2014 5:27 am

Well, **** just got real. All aboard the fucked up **** train! Buckle up because this train's got no brakes, son.

I wonder if Harmony would've ever turn on her own father? Probably not, I'm sure, because she definitely has to have a tight loyalty bond to her father, but that kinda of stuff tends to one day just become irrelevant to sadists and crazies. I know you can't really comment on that, but I'm just thinking out loud.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby Tanten137 » Sat Dec 27, 2014 6:00 am

The second I saw there was a dog I immediately knew what was going to happen!
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Sun Dec 28, 2014 6:57 pm

With all the ideas I have for Harmony's storyline, she pretty much hijacked this short, lol. Roy and Oliver are being neglected.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby tyrud » Wed Dec 31, 2014 12:46 am

I'll be honest with you, while Oliver has an interesting dynamic to him and I'm curious to see where the hell Roy is going, Harmony and her family have the most interesting story line and conflict of the three, so I can't be mad about that.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Wed Dec 31, 2014 2:10 am

I agree, and that's why I'm shelving the other stories for now. The next part will probably be Roy, but after that it'll focus on Harmony for a while.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby TheTeddyguy » Sun Jan 04, 2015 8:30 pm

Just caught up on this.
The dog made me genuinely sad lol.
Roy's captors must be fans of The Most Dangerous Game, at least that's what his situation reminded me of.
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"She had a face like a bulldog licking **** off a nettle."-Jingles
"so he resigned himself to dying in a trash can."


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