If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby tyrud » Wed Dec 07, 2016 5:24 pm

It's always interesting to get these little bits of lore about the various special units and the little nuances of each society from reading both your guy's shorts. Looking forward to many more.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Thu Jan 19, 2017 1:39 am

I have the next Bert part started, but I'm getting burnt out on him, so I want to do someone else. Between Omar and Oliver, who should get a part next? Marcus is out because I have no drive to write for an **** right now.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby TheTeddyguy » Thu Jan 19, 2017 1:42 am

Omar
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby tyrud » Thu Jan 19, 2017 4:10 am

I agree with Teddy. We didn't get much of a feel for Omar and I liked the whole mystery/western theme.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Thu Jan 19, 2017 5:18 pm

I'll probably have an Omar part out some time tomorrow or this weekend.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Sat Jan 21, 2017 12:30 am

I like writing for Omar for the same reason I like writing for Oliver: I feel like I get more detail in when I write in first-person and that the details are more meaningful.

Was Omar 4 a good post? I feel like the interview might be a little too short.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby TheTeddyguy » Sat Jan 21, 2017 6:00 am

I had to reread the other parts to get back up to speed with it, but yeah it was good.
"**** it, it's late."-Coins "Change it later."-Teddy
"She had a face like a bulldog licking **** off a nettle."-Jingles
"so he resigned himself to dying in a trash can."

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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby tyrud » Sat Jan 21, 2017 6:03 am

Considering all the obstacles in Omar's way and the stage of the investigation, I think the length is fine.
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Fri Feb 17, 2017 5:39 pm

I have a new Oliver post incoming soon. Maybe within the hour if I don't get interrupted.

EDIT: Got called to go somewhere less than fifteen minutes later, kek, **** me
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Re: If I Stand, We Fall (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Sat Mar 11, 2017 12:44 am

I have about 700 words of the next Oliver post written, so that should be out this weekend.
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"**** it, it's late. Change it later." ~Me and Teddy


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