A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

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Re: A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

Postby TheTeddyguy » Thu Feb 16, 2017 3:20 pm

I wanted this to be one big part, but figured this was a good enough spot to cut it off and post to ensure something gets up today.
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Re: A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Thu Feb 16, 2017 7:01 pm

>ER is full of illegal aliens named Rivera and Perez

Good post.
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Re: A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

Postby TheTeddyguy » Thu Feb 16, 2017 7:03 pm

When coming up with random jobber last names, I just browse Facebook and slap on the first couple last names I see that I don't recall being used before.
"**** it, it's late."-Coins "Change it later."-Teddy
"She had a face like a bulldog licking **** off a nettle."-Jingles
"so he resigned himself to dying in a trash can."

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Re: A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

Postby tyrud » Fri Feb 17, 2017 3:55 am

I liked the moments of short self-dialogue in this one. Looking forward to the next.
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Re: A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

Postby TheTeddyguy » Fri Feb 17, 2017 3:56 am

Trying to add more of that, and will likely start inserting it in certain spots once we go for the second round of editing on C3O.

Glad you liked it.
"**** it, it's late."-Coins "Change it later."-Teddy
"She had a face like a bulldog licking **** off a nettle."-Jingles
"so he resigned himself to dying in a trash can."

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Re: A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

Postby TheTeddyguy » Fri Mar 10, 2017 8:59 am

I assume you're fine with what I wrote in for Church taking Laura under her wing, if not I'll change it.

I'm so glad I thought to add in these letters, it'll be a chance to let Malorie unravel her thoughts and feelings to the reader every now and again, since the rest of the time she'll be bottled up tight trying to be hardcore military ****.
"**** it, it's late."-Coins "Change it later."-Teddy
"She had a face like a bulldog licking **** off a nettle."-Jingles
"so he resigned himself to dying in a trash can."

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Re: A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

Postby coinsruledude » Fri Mar 10, 2017 3:01 pm

Good post. I like the letters too.
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Re: A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

Postby TheTeddyguy » Fri Mar 10, 2017 3:15 pm

Thanks, I was a bit worried about if throwing three letters in one post was a bit much or not.
"**** it, it's late."-Coins "Change it later."-Teddy
"She had a face like a bulldog licking **** off a nettle."-Jingles
"so he resigned himself to dying in a trash can."

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Re: A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

Postby tyrud » Fri Mar 10, 2017 11:40 pm

You know how long my 'shorts' get, so don't ever be afraid to let yours run a little long.

I really liked that post, Teddy. Your writing is a continent away from where it was when we started all this (in the best way). Look forward to the next one, and I'm curious to see what Church has to say about Colin (probably not much, haha). Feel free to PM me too if you need anything for your next post.
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Re: A Requiem For Humanity (OOC)

Postby TheTeddyguy » Fri Mar 10, 2017 11:43 pm

Thank you, and glad you liked it. I have really started to find my groove with writing this past year or so I feel. Absorbing audiobook after audiobook at work has definitely been lending a hand also.
"**** it, it's late."-Coins "Change it later."-Teddy
"She had a face like a bulldog licking **** off a nettle."-Jingles
"so he resigned himself to dying in a trash can."


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