Terminal Illness - C3O Short

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Re: Terminal Illness - C3O Short

Postby tyrud » Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:10 am

I might do mine as well, though it probably won't be as long as either of yours.

@Coins probably. Before and at the barn there was just a lot of character set up, not to mention there wasn't much going on either.
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Re: Terminal Illness - C3O Short

Postby coinsruledude » Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:25 am

So here's how I see the RP-copying break down. This doesn't have to start now, or any time soon for that matter, but just for reference:

Teddy: 1 - 150
Coins: 151 - 300
Tyrud: 301 - 380

Priorities:
1. Delete OOC talk, external links, and other elements that don't involve the story
2. Fix what grammatical errors you can find; if the error is in dialogue and appears to be intentional, leave it
3. Rearrange posts into chronological order/group posts about certain events or perspectives together (ex. if Lionel and Adam are looting something in a store while Teddy and Matt are punching each other at the same time in a different location: group the posts from xmas and tyrud together, make a separation of some kind (I prefer the squiggle ~), and then group posts from Teddy and Coins together to make things less choppy)
4. Add inner thoughts/minor actions to your own characters' perspectives (DON'T alter other characters' thoughts/actions without someone's consent
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Re: Terminal Illness - C3O Short

Postby TheTeddyguy » Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:26 am

Sounds good to me.
"**** it, it's late."-Coins "Change it later."-Teddy
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Re: Terminal Illness - C3O Short

Postby tyrud » Wed Nov 06, 2013 1:37 am

I dig it. Eventually we can come together and make a Google doc together or something so that we can edit the full thing with each other right there for instant clarifications.
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Re: Terminal Illness - C3O Short

Postby coinsruledude » Tue Jan 07, 2014 7:32 pm

Terminal Illness is now around 94,400 words. I added almost 1600 from editing up until Sierra dies, lol.
TheTeddyguy wrote:I want to get on copying A New Beginning now to see how much it is, I'm actually proud of us lol.
Did you ever do this, Teddy? If not, you should. Editing my short helps keep the boredom and rage away when Endless Seas gets slow, lol.
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Re: Terminal Illness - C3O Short

Postby TheTeddyguy » Tue Jan 07, 2014 7:36 pm

Yeah I'll probably get on that tonight, haven't started yet.
"**** it, it's late."-Coins "Change it later."-Teddy
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Re: Terminal Illness - C3O Short

Postby TheTeddyguy » Tue Jan 07, 2014 8:40 pm

367279 characters, 67,317 words, 131 pages before any editing at all lol.
"**** it, it's late."-Coins "Change it later."-Teddy
"She had a face like a bulldog licking **** off a nettle."-Jingles
"so he resigned himself to dying in a trash can."

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Re: Terminal Illness - C3O Short

Postby coinsruledude » Tue Jan 07, 2014 8:57 pm

Only a few thousand words from beating out the first Harry Potter book, lol. Nice.
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Re: Terminal Illness - C3O Short

Postby coinsruledude » Wed Jan 08, 2014 1:11 am

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Re: Terminal Illness - C3O Short

Postby TheTeddyguy » Wed Jan 08, 2014 3:35 am

What's the name of that meme? Haven't seen that one lol.
"**** it, it's late."-Coins "Change it later."-Teddy
"She had a face like a bulldog licking **** off a nettle."-Jingles
"so he resigned himself to dying in a trash can."


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