(Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

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Re: (Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

Postby coinsruledude » Mon Nov 04, 2013 10:12 am

tyrud wrote:but what I'm seeing is that the majority of the work is going to be trying to make what are essentially individual chronologically connected and organized fragments into a coherent story. Transitions will really need to be looked at because currently it looks pretty erratic at the moment.
That's what the squiggles are for.
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Re: (Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

Postby tyrud » Mon Nov 04, 2013 8:29 pm

I understand that, but I don't think you can have squiggles in a real book like that. We'd need to add actual paragraphs and transitions at one point. I'm not saying we should do it now, just at one point.
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Re: (Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

Postby coinsruledude » Mon Nov 04, 2013 10:19 pm

I'm focusing on getting Terminal Illness into a Word document first anyway, lol.
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Re: (Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

Postby coinsruledude » Mon Nov 04, 2013 11:00 pm

coinsruledude wrote:“First of all,” Sierra said coldy, staring at him. “I took over the safe zone and imprisoned all of your supporters. It doesn’t matter that Alcatraz’s power plant was destroyed. I won’t need use of the Rock soon anyway-“

“Because you plan on hanging everyone?” Evan asked, horrified.
“Exactly,” Sierra said, shifting her cold gaze from Reeves to Evan.
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EVAN YOU POOR SOUL
HE WORKED FOR HER TWO DAYS BEFORE THIS AND HAD NO IDEA WHAT WAS ABOUT TO HAPPEN
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Re: (Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

Postby coinsruledude » Wed Nov 06, 2013 9:03 pm

I'm thinking about changing Matt and Jeff's last name to something more Polish. Probably Bednarski.
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Re: (Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

Postby TheTeddyguy » Wed Nov 06, 2013 9:09 pm

We will have to change the last judgements name if we make this a book, xmas took the name from the rebuild flash game series.
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Re: (Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

Postby coinsruledude » Wed Nov 06, 2013 9:17 pm

TheTeddyguy wrote:We will have to change the last judgements name if we make this a book, xmas took the name from the rebuild flash game series.
I FORGOT ABOUT THAT
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THEY WERE MENTIONED SO MUCH
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LIKE SO MUCH
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LIKE "MAJOR PLOT ELEMENT" MUCH
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Re: (Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

Postby TheTeddyguy » Wed Nov 06, 2013 9:31 pm

Yeah, that's going to be what takes up the majority of our editing time lol..

Name suggestions? It should be a name that could initially get people behind it like, Apocalypse Survival Front or something.
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Re: (Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

Postby coinsruledude » Wed Nov 06, 2013 9:38 pm

TheTeddyguy wrote:Apocalypse Survival Front
That's pretty damn good right there. The ASF.
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Re: (Role-Play) Class 3 Outbreak [OOC]

Postby tyrud » Wed Nov 06, 2013 9:48 pm

I like it, though it doesn't really sound like a biker gang. At this point I'm assuming they were a biker gang before the apocalypse, because that's what they seemed to be according to the story, so maybe they should have a biker gang name.

Maybe the 7th Day Reapers or Attila's Demons, I don't know.
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